Friday, November 26, 2010

Narrative Text


Who Is The Food’s Thieve?

Our family just moved to this town since three weeks ago. We moved here because of my Dad’s job. Everything was okay at the beginning. We got a new house at a good environment. We got nice neighbours too here.

But since few days ago, our kitchen always messed up every morning. Our  foods were miss. We thought that it was stolen by mice, so my Dad tried to put on a mouse trap. But it didn’t works. The food was missing and missing again.

My Dad decided to monitoring the kitchen at the middle of night. He hide behind the kitchen door. Suddenly, someone entrance the kitchen. Dad caught him, and he was surprise. He is our driver!

“Why did you steal our foods? “ asked my Dad.

“I’m sorry, Sir. I took those foods for the securities who guard this home. How poor they are. They did they job with empty stomach.”

Then we realized that we didn’t care much about our securities. We just paid them without care about they health. Since that, we always give them food beside paid their salary. And for the honest driver, we gave him special gift which he could enjoy with his family

4 comments:

  1. wow..good, winta. u tell the situation first then u give it, a problem then come the resolution.
    flow...^^

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  2. hei winta..

    you pour the story into a good words.. thats very nice ;)

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  3. ohai winta~

    the structure and story is great. :D
    also, arrangement of the paragraph is in order
    keep up your good work :)

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  4. that's an interesting story...

    I like ur writing style... :)

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